The first 4 seconds is slow motion footage of people dancing at a party.
The 30 seconds after is purely drums. We decided to use a montage of shots to convey time. This includes people people walking, sped up footage of cars speeding down a road, sped up footage of the clouds drifting across the sky, a girl putting lipgloss on ready for a party, and most importantly, two pairs of feet, our main characters walking in opposing directions to the sound of the music. The last shot would be split screened and showing their feet walking in a building with lights.
There is then a sound effect in the track that sounds like it has been rewinded. This lasts for about 1 second. At this point it would be effective to rewind the feet going into the building then even faster, rewind the feet walking back to a black screen.
Why' d you do the things you do X20.
At this stage, the two girls are in different settings, and are getting ready for the party. They are putting on different coloured makeup, doing their hair very different hairstyles and perform to show their different personalities. The girls are lip syncing at this point.
Brandy: This verse will be Brandy, who is the 'sweet girl, the more femenine girl out of the two. Her lip syncing at this point is very humbly and sweetly two her reflection in the mirror.
I think it's time we got this straight
Let's sit and talk face to face
There is no way you could mistake
Him (a shot of the boy in the photoframe) for your man are you insane
Monica: Monica on the other hand is the more aggressive singer and she would be putting on heavy eyeliner and would haver more of an attitude.
You see I know that you may be
Just be jealous of me - directly to the camera lip syncing
Cuz you're blind if you can't see
That his love is all in me
At this point I would want to include the green screen and have a close up of Brandy's face lip syncing to the left in the space. The actress would be infront of a white screen to connote innocence.
Brandy:
You see I tried to hesitate
I didn't wanna say what they told me
He said without me he couldn't make
It through the day ain't that a shame
Same as for Brandy, I would use the same shot for Monica but this time over black.
Monica:
Maybe you misunderstood
Cause I can't see how he could
Wanna change something that's so good
But my love is all it took
This is the chorus, and all good music videos have a change in atmosphere through lighting, costume and pace to distinguish the chorus so we would change the setting and the time to the day before, and both girls are in daylight, battling it out.
Both:
You need to give it up
Had about enough
It's not hard to see
The boy is mine
I'm sorry that you
Seem to be confused
He belongs to me
The boy is mine
Here i think it would still be effective and use the greenscreen but to also have shots of the boy in the middle lookind distressed has he doesn't know what girl to choose.
Monica:
Must you do the things you do
You keep on acting like a fool
You need to know it's me not you
And if you didn't know it girl it's true
The girls here are also becoming more hysterical over the boy and there are a lot of shots of the boy in a picture on a phone, in a photo album, in a heart pendant.
Brandy:
I think that you should realize
And try to understand why
He is a part of my life
I know it's killing you inside
Brandy and Monica convey stress over this boy. They are back to their different settings and are getting ready to leave for this party. They are walking down the road hysterically ready to fight over their crush at the party.
Both: X2
You need to give it up
Had about enough
It's not hard to see
The boy is mine
I'm sorry that you
Seem to be confused
He belongs to me
The boy is mine
I think it's time we got this straight
Let's sit and talk face to face
There is no way you could mistake
Him (a shot of the boy in the photoframe) for your man are you insane
Monica: Monica on the other hand is the more aggressive singer and she would be putting on heavy eyeliner and would haver more of an attitude.
You see I know that you may be
Just be jealous of me - directly to the camera lip syncing
Cuz you're blind if you can't see
That his love is all in me
At this point I would want to include the green screen and have a close up of Brandy's face lip syncing to the left in the space. The actress would be infront of a white screen to connote innocence.
Brandy:
You see I tried to hesitate
I didn't wanna say what they told me
He said without me he couldn't make
It through the day ain't that a shame
Same as for Brandy, I would use the same shot for Monica but this time over black.
Monica:
Maybe you misunderstood
Cause I can't see how he could
Wanna change something that's so good
But my love is all it took
This is the chorus, and all good music videos have a change in atmosphere through lighting, costume and pace to distinguish the chorus so we would change the setting and the time to the day before, and both girls are in daylight, battling it out.
Both:
You need to give it up
Had about enough
It's not hard to see
The boy is mine
I'm sorry that you
Seem to be confused
He belongs to me
The boy is mine
Here i think it would still be effective and use the greenscreen but to also have shots of the boy in the middle lookind distressed has he doesn't know what girl to choose.
Monica:
Must you do the things you do
You keep on acting like a fool
You need to know it's me not you
And if you didn't know it girl it's true
The girls here are also becoming more hysterical over the boy and there are a lot of shots of the boy in a picture on a phone, in a photo album, in a heart pendant.
Brandy:
I think that you should realize
And try to understand why
He is a part of my life
I know it's killing you inside
Brandy and Monica convey stress over this boy. They are back to their different settings and are getting ready to leave for this party. They are walking down the road hysterically ready to fight over their crush at the party.
Both: X2
You need to give it up
Had about enough
It's not hard to see
The boy is mine
I'm sorry that you
Seem to be confused
He belongs to me
The boy is mine
The party scene. And the confrontation between the two girls.
It is clear from the lyrics of the song, that Monica is more dominant than Brandy. Therefore I would want Brandy to be portrayed as th emore innocent of the two, then Monica to be portrayed in a more aggressive way.
Thoughtful annotations and good ideas.
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Perhaps you could have explained more about the genre of your artist and how you plan to represent her.
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